Do u have any suggestions for me ?!

Question: Do u have any suggestions for me !?

this is a poem i wrote but i'm stuck

My friend is not eating
all because of one guy
she is going to take a good beating
the day that she dies

The day that she dies
he will finally realize
that she truly did love him

that is as far as i could get i am stuck right there please help me find the rest of the poem

thanks Www@Answer-Health@Com

Answers:

i think it is good how it is w/ that ending!.
maybe you want to add to the middle, or beginning, but keep that endingWww@Answer-Health@Com

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