Does this sound probable? Please answer soon! On a deadline!?!
Question: Does this sound probable? Please answer soon! On a deadline!?
I'm writing a play about a couple of burn victims...does their stories sound probable?
Girl: Severe third degree burns covering her left leg. She is in the hospital for a month before physical therapy is taken. She is aprrox. 16/17. Average female.
Boy: Severe third degree burns to his hands and wrists, second degree burns to his face, arms, chest, and legs. (at least 60% of his body is burned.) Is in the hospital for a month before physical therapy is taken...He has his thumbs amputated and two of his fingers as well. He is approx. 16/17, an average male.
If you can't give me a straight answer, please give me some websites! This is due in two days time! Thx!
Girl: Severe third degree burns covering her left leg. She is in the hospital for a month before physical therapy is taken. She is aprrox. 16/17. Average female.
Boy: Severe third degree burns to his hands and wrists, second degree burns to his face, arms, chest, and legs. (at least 60% of his body is burned.) Is in the hospital for a month before physical therapy is taken...He has his thumbs amputated and two of his fingers as well. He is approx. 16/17, an average male.
If you can't give me a straight answer, please give me some websites! This is due in two days time! Thx!
Answers:
It does sound plausible. I agree, more detail is better.
22 years as a paramedic
it sounds facinating. the more detail the better. but try not to gross the readers out...