Do u have any suggestions for me ?!
Question: Do u have any suggestions for me !?
this is a poem i wrote but i'm stuck
My friend is not eating
all because of one guy
she is going to take a good beating
the day that she dies
The day that she dies
he will finally realize
that she truly did love him
that is as far as i could get i am stuck right there please help me find the rest of the poem
thanks Www@Answer-Health@Com
My friend is not eating
all because of one guy
she is going to take a good beating
the day that she dies
The day that she dies
he will finally realize
that she truly did love him
that is as far as i could get i am stuck right there please help me find the rest of the poem
thanks Www@Answer-Health@Com
Answers:
i think it is good how it is w/ that ending!.
maybe you want to add to the middle, or beginning, but keep that endingWww@Answer-Health@Com
maybe you want to add to the middle, or beginning, but keep that endingWww@Answer-Health@Com